Thank you to those who posted comments I appreciate you taking the time to do so and those who found it interesting. Still am interested to hear people's views so please continue to comment good or bad, as I said it can give me ideas.
This storyline could have run and run and there were several scenarios that I could have explored but I'm sure if it goes on too long it will begin to bore people. So the next episode will conclude this part and hopefully it will end in such a way as whoever picks upte story will have a clean slate and can introduce other characters.
Time is an issue with me right now so unsure when I will be able to finish it, hopefully within 10 12 days.
Rose and Jack pt 4