tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post802940093525297565..comments2024-03-23T23:05:01.651-07:00Comments on Bea's TV Station: Rose and Jack pt 4Bea's TV Stationhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18140517314106768037noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-38731210735239264772016-12-19T16:48:34.948-08:002016-12-19T16:48:34.948-08:00Did you know that you can shorten your urls with L...Did you know that you can shorten your urls with <b><a href="http://shortener.syntaxlinks.com/r/LinkShrink" rel="nofollow">LinkShrink</a></b> and <b>get dollars from every visit to</b> your shortened urls.Bloggerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07287821785570247118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-25620698646477744872013-03-07T06:00:32.125-08:002013-03-07T06:00:32.125-08:00This is getting to be a great story, one of the be...This is getting to be a great story, one of the best ever on Bea's station. We're loving the Rose and Jackie (or Elizabeth) relationship and we adore the one between Pamela and Jackie. If Jackie/Elizabeth does become Pamela's regular maid, how long can it be before she realises who this maid really is? Or does she know already and is teasing him by pretending she doesnt? And what will happen when Jack's mum returns? This could make a really great film, with oscars all-round, especially to Carrie P for the screen play. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-22539320667132484212013-03-06T19:22:40.259-08:002013-03-06T19:22:40.259-08:00Yikes, unless I'm mistaken, it seems as though...Yikes, unless I'm mistaken, it seems as though Jack is about to be plunged headfirst into what I assume is his first sexual experience. I was not expecting that... not that I'm complaining.<br /><br />Given that Jack is presumably very inexperienced in dealings with the opposite sex, it does seem to me that a bit more emphasis could be placed on his embarrassment and/or excitement at certain situations that could be perceived as potentially erotic. An example of that would be in the previous installment when he had to change in front of Rose. Obviously he's embarrassed, but he doesn't seems quite as reluctant or shy about this as I think someone of that age and nature would be in that circumstance. But maybe that's just me.<br /><br />Anyway, I liked this chapter and appreciated the inclusion of Pamela. When Bea had proposed this project, I'd voiced reservations about the logistics of weaving a cohesive narrative. I'd pictured a potential train wreck of various authors writing at cross-purposes, but it does make more sense to me if each contributor follows this formula and tackles different, relatively self-contained aspects of Jack's life. <br /><br />It will be interesting to see how long it takes for this to form a complete story. Again, I wish I could contribute, but I can't think of what I'd add and I find writing to be a very painfully slow process that I probably don't have the time to attempt right now.rocketdavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00574717380856957685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-87617620766043585392013-03-05T09:01:21.593-08:002013-03-05T09:01:21.593-08:00Thankyou Carrie P. This is a fantastic story, it i...Thankyou Carrie P. This is a fantastic story, it is getting better with each episode. I wonder whether Pamela does really know who this new maid is, but is pretending she doesnt so that poor Jack(ie) continues to suffer. Will he be made to become Pamela's personal maid and then also have to serve others in her horrible gang? He does deserve to!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com