tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post4886347660119676565..comments2024-03-23T23:05:01.651-07:00Comments on Bea's TV Station: Amongst Women Part 3Bea's TV Stationhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18140517314106768037noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-50524183328168187632014-01-27T13:54:57.969-08:002014-01-27T13:54:57.969-08:00Zee pretty FrenchMaid, does not have it in Zee sha...Zee pretty FrenchMaid, does not have it in Zee shade, so Zee mice can play while da mistress and her Zee cat is away? She locked me in Zee maid's uniform, I can't get it to unlock, Or take it Z part, Zee corset is tried and true, it's a pretty sissy pink, not blue? I'm stuck in Zee ruffle panties, With my garter belt and zee stockings! Let's not forget Zee shoes with tiny padlocks too foil and confuse! It's no use, I'm locked in, I can't meet z date at the log cabin, I'm dolled up with makeup and nail polish, I cannot see her, I look too girlish! Made too maid, sissy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-17756013911554857162013-08-04T13:12:50.098-07:002013-08-04T13:12:50.098-07:00Look forward for the next part of this very true s...Look forward for the next part of this very true story, it is just like we would like to be I think.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-31568615632879251432013-07-27T13:03:51.266-07:002013-07-27T13:03:51.266-07:00I agree Maid Brenda, its a really interesting them...I agree Maid Brenda, its a really interesting theme. Having worked as a parlourmaid for a number of Mistresses, I've found being in service to be liberating as well as humiliating. Its also very satisfying to wear attractive uniforms and keep them in pristine condition so that Madam is pleased with my appearance. After a while you get to the point where you want to remain as a maid and not return to a dreary male existence. I guess Jack is starting to feel this way in Carrie's excellent "Amongst Women" story. Best of all is to be put in a situation when you are deprived of any male clothing and are left wondering whether you will have to remain as a maid for hours or days. Or months or years! Lets try and keep Bea's wonderful Maid theme going, it has such delicious potential... LG xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-64502229088637424612013-07-25T04:25:03.475-07:002013-07-25T04:25:03.475-07:00This is such a great site. Are there more writers ...This is such a great site. Are there more writers out there with the Maid Theme that are willing to write on this site. Keep up the great work Kind regards Maid BrendaMaid Brendanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-44264137801731593832013-07-18T12:44:26.033-07:002013-07-18T12:44:26.033-07:00Gina, I guess we may have to wait a while for Carr...Gina, I guess we may have to wait a while for Carrie to share the next instalment with us. She creates such a clever and convincing story but it obviously does take time. <br />So we must be patient, although personally I can't wait to see where this story goes next - especially when Miss Fairfax and her other maids return from their weekend away... <br />Is Jack going to find himself trapped as a contracted maid in the Fairfax/Quinn household for four years? Or will his mom intervene and insist he returns to school after this bizarre weekend?And, if he does go back to continue his education, how will he cope with Miss Pamela's relentless teasing after having shown himself to be so well suited to serving as her family's parlourmaid?<br />There are so many unanswered questions in this amazing and fantastic saga! Good luck with the next episode Carrie and thank you so very much for what you've written so far. LG xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-78563756361821795992013-07-18T09:51:40.747-07:002013-07-18T09:51:40.747-07:00Enjoyable read, please do continue.Enjoyable read, please do continue.Gina Vizavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04463578537392027294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-33174506980159559342013-07-14T12:48:15.464-07:002013-07-14T12:48:15.464-07:00Fantastic story, getting better all the time. Ple...Fantastic story, getting better all the time. Please keep going x<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-13498063745359040492013-07-11T09:21:21.450-07:002013-07-11T09:21:21.450-07:00As Colette says this is very nice story. Love the ...As Colette says this is very nice story. Love the way the women all are ganged up on Jack, seems they are showing each other there best ways to humilliate him. "Among Women" sums it up not sure what would happen next if a man came on the scene. So many scenarios come to mind and love the way the story unfolds.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-63467329603732068402013-07-10T12:53:02.957-07:002013-07-10T12:53:02.957-07:00Very very nice!
A Kiss,
coletteVery very nice!<br /><br />A Kiss,<br />coletteAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-5287581552182306102013-07-09T10:13:53.428-07:002013-07-09T10:13:53.428-07:00Hi, this is a brilliant story, I love the way Jack...Hi, this is a brilliant story, I love the way Jack is getting more and more used to being Elizabeth the maid. I guess there's a whole lot of us out there who would love to be in his shoes (yes, the ones with high heels!), a favourite fantasy of mine that's for sure.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-12456467391015077862013-07-08T11:59:54.260-07:002013-07-08T11:59:54.260-07:00That's no problem Carrie, much better to wait ...That's no problem Carrie, much better to wait and have another really great episode. Thus far your "Amongst Women" theme has developed beautifully from the earlier "Rose and Jack" saga and it would be a shame to spoil it by rushing.<br /><br />I'll be away travelling for the latter part of July but I will definitely want to pick up my "Back to School" sub-plot (excuse the pun!) when I get back early August. As I said in an earlier comment, I don't like to think that these young people are neglecting their education - even if, at this stage, they focus mainly on the particular skills they will need for their chosen career.<br /><br />But I'm anxious not to cut across Carrie's "Amongst Women" theme, so will wait until August to see how far that has developed before I start writing.<br /><br />Have a great summer and, one way or another, there'll be plenty more of Bea's "wee bit of fun" for readers to enjoy as the nights draw in.<br /><br />Love and kisses, "Lucky Girl"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-51750890017002938892013-07-08T09:27:10.501-07:002013-07-08T09:27:10.501-07:00Thanks Dave, LG and Anons for the comments it’s g...Thanks Dave, LG and Anons for the comments it’s good to know that you have enjoyed it so far and your words have made the effort to write it worthwhile. LG, I’m afraid it will be at least a month before I can publish another episode and it could be the last in this strand but I’m still not sure, we’ll see. Dave put it very well when he mentioned the difficulties he has when it comes to even composing an e mail. It describes me exactly. Sometimes it just flows and there are times it takes me forever to write a paragraph, the ending to the last chapter was a case in point. I mulled over various endings for days and then the one used just came to me in five minutes. Plus there’s a lot of issues going on in my life just now which doesn’t exactly help. <br />Anyway hopefully there’s a bit to go yet, Mrs Fairfax does sound an interesting character and she may be worth exploring, I don’t know if it’s practical to see Rose make a reappearance as she started all this. I’m still not sure that it’s a good idea to introduce too many Dommes as that particular space may get a bit crowded but on the other hand new Dommes can spice things up if they have the right qualities. I’d only wish Bea had made him 16/17 , 14 is a bit weird for me but I reckon he must be 15 by now. <br /> Something I’ve meant to mention before. I’m very aware that Bea’s readers are from all over the English speaking world but mainly in the US, there are words/phrases that are not common to all. I’ve tried to avoid this as much as possible. A practical example there may be a part of the story in the future where the school is on a break , in Ireland/UK it’s called mid/half- term in the US it’s Spring break I believe ( what’s the Autumn/Fall version?) don’t know what they’re called in South Africa, India, Australia etc. There are several of these, eg, Ireland/UK it’s the back garden, US – the back yard, Ire/UK pavement, US sidewalk, Ire/UK arse, US – ass and many more so hopefully wherever you are it will make sense but maybe that’s a minor issue. Just thought I’d mention it.<br />I’ve started on part 4 but as mentioned I know it will take a while so bear with me.<br />Carrie<br />Carrie Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16356755446225712759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-73702271574888018042013-07-08T06:34:29.468-07:002013-07-08T06:34:29.468-07:00This is fantastic. Cannot wait for next instalmen...This is fantastic. Cannot wait for next instalment and see what happens when the 'battle axe' comes home with all her other maids. Also what Jack's mother will say when she sees what a convincing daughter she now has.<br />She might prefer to have daughter Elizabeth, working and earning some money, in place of Jack. Please keep this amazing story going. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-32312740677301109262013-07-05T11:02:16.150-07:002013-07-05T11:02:16.150-07:00"Lucky Girl" here - fantastic Carrie, t..."Lucky Girl" here - fantastic Carrie, this episode opens up all sorts of new possibilities. And we haven't even seen Pamela's Aunt Georgina return home yet - nor of course her own maids. And then there's Jack's mother, and Rose, and.... who else might Carrie bring into the action to add to Jack's torment? This really could run and run.<br /><br />I'm definitely going to hold back on my promised "Back to School" episodes, whilst we see how long Jack remains as Elizabeth. Will he/she stay on in Georgina Fairfax's household after the weekend, whilst presumably Pamela will need to be back in school?<br />Will he/she end up signing a four-year contract like the other neighbouring servants and not return to the Stuyvesant Academy at all?<br /><br />We'll have to wait and see, won't we? But please Carrie, please don't keep us waiting three weeks next time!!! This is the best male maid story I think I've ever read!<br /><br />LG XXXAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-74486233273870738202013-07-05T00:45:34.061-07:002013-07-05T00:45:34.061-07:00It might be a bit cliche to say so, but this has c...It might be a bit cliche to say so, but this has certainly been worth the wait. Besides, three weeks hardly seems that bad from my perspective, especially taking into account the fact that some writers can take months or even years to update their stories, if they ever do at all. If I were trying to write something, I hate to think how slowly I'd be producing chapters. It takes me an interminably long time just to compose a simple email. <br /><br />Every time I keep imagining there can't be anything new to add to this plot, Carrie, you keep finding all these interesting avenues, such as the introduction of the other maid characters in this installment. And back when this thing started, I had a difficult time envisioning this going much further past the point where Jack is initially feminized.<br /><br />The very ending of this installment is particularly amusing, when Jack's momentary desire to rebel is abruptly extinguished by the training that's been drilled into him. His confidence that he won't allow himself to be punished in the manner of the other maids also makes me laugh, as I'm fairly certain he'll be proven wrong about that before too long.rocketdavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00574717380856957685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6444180381501478270.post-62705368414834556282013-07-04T22:40:27.599-07:002013-07-04T22:40:27.599-07:00oh, "the rule book!!" I am really thrill...oh, "the rule book!!" I am really thrilled how pamela makes the rule book which is eloborately demeaning Jack, pushes him into web of feminine, humiliating nightmare. Great, Carrie.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com